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As we all know,shopping online has become a popular thing.More and more people start to buy something that includes clothes,shoes,makeups,toolsand so on through the internet.Now,i want to say something about the phenonmenon. Shopping online is convenient.We can get something without going out just with our thumbs,that's so interesting.Besides,we have more choices to select our goods,that's because there are so many different kinds of goods on the internet. on the other side ,it has disadvantages.we can't feel the goods' material,can't know wherther the size is that we want.and maybe there are some bad things instead of the good that is sold to us. as far as my concerned,shopping online has two sides,we everyone should think over seriously before we want to buy something.if we need something that is very important,we'd better go to the stores or malls,instead ,if something isn't important,we surely buy it through the internet.
