2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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My views on Online Shopping With the science and technology development.More and more people like shopping on online.Nowadays,on online shopping had became a fashion. On online shopping can help people saving much time, now young people have much pressure so they have to try to do everything, on online shopping not only can help they saving time but also can help they saving money.Online have all kinds of clothes、skirt and shoes and so on also on online shopping have many advantages but also have many questions. On online shopping easy make people expense more money,it will make people had moer pressure.It also will make people are addicted to online. online have many saler are not honesty so many people will buy some bad thing it will hurt people. In my opinion,on online shoppping have many advantage and disadvantage. so when we on online shopping we should be carefully,people also should control yourself on online shopping!