小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

单词拼写做得很好，请注意积累词汇量；结构良好，但是语言不流畅；增加一些从句的使用，文章会更棒。

My table on a picture. In this picture. This is Jim she is a good children,she has a big eyes, yellow hair and big noes. This is Jim's father, his has a big eyes and black hair and then he is a farmer. This is Jim's mother, her has a big nose and yellow hair and then she is an English teacher. They are happy family!