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字数：300 满分：100分
错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；作者能较恰当使用丰富词汇，在高级词汇方面希望能更熟练一些行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Should students save money? From my persipective, of course yes. For one reason, students get money only from one way that is to ask their parents for money. Since students don't work so they don't have jobs that get paid. Without salary, there is only one way to make both ends meet. And for another, thrifty is one of the Chinese traditional vertue. As a advanced young people in the 21th century, we should inherit the essence of the spirit that our ancestors.
