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Our study is quite similar with nurturing, however, the object is diffrent, it is the knowledge. It is generally known that it takes a long process to make a knowledge that you have just learned internalized so that you are able to use it excellently. In the spring, we are sowing. That is when you first learn something, and you start to remember it unconsiously that is motivated by your brain. To give it a definition, I'd like to call it the spring of learing. Then from the spring through the summer to the early autumn, we are nurturing. This is the longest and the hardest also the middle part of the whole process. It takes patience and arduous effort to take good care of the seedlings. And this is the pivital part of our learning. All our konwledge which have just learned need to be strengthened so that we can give deep insight in them and bare them in mind. Finally, we well come the harvest time, and it is the time to harvest the fruit that we have been giving working for several months! At the same time in correspondence to the time in learing, we at last gain the konwledge we want literally.
