采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用;作者词汇量积累不错,能较灵活地使用高级词汇。
Our study is quite similar with nurturing, however, the object is different, it is the knowledge. It is generally known that it takes a long process to make a knowledge that you have just learned internalized for that reason you are able to use it excellently. In the spring, we are sowing. That is when you first learn something, and you start to remember it unconsciously that is motivated by your brain. To give it a definition, I'd like to call it the spring of learning. Then from the spring through the summer to the early autumn, we are nurturing. This is the longest and the hardest and also the middle part of the entire process. It takes patience and arduous effort to take good care of the seedlings. And this is the pivotal part of our learning. All our konwledge which have just learned need to be strengthened hence we can give deep insight in them and bare them in mind. Finally, we well come the harvest time, and it is the time to harvest the fruit that we have been giving working for several months! At the same time in correspondence to the time in learing, we eventually gain the knowledge we want literally.