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China has vast territor, there are many interesting place. but my farvorite place is my hometown. My hometown is a vllege that in the west place in our country. there have kindly person, they give anybody on worm. I have a place that i think you must willing to there with me . As we all know , it boreds Kazakhstan on west,which sold many Specialty of Kazakhstan .You can see ,the beautiful blankets, and tast delicous chocolate and so on. do you want go to there with me?
