小学二年级英语作文:A Trip

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A trip A trip to Hawaii. I knew Hawaii from the film . As I have a poor spoken English and my poor financial circumstance, I can't start the trip to Hawaii. But it can not prevent me to plan this trip. I can start it in my brain first, and when I have a fluent spoken English and a good financial support, and of course, enough time, I'll start the real trip. After arrive Hawaii,I'll go to the aquarium at first, where the "egg head" has worked.Then I'll take a ship to the island where Lucy lived. I should go to the restaurant where Henry and Lucy first meet each other to eat breakfast. In the next days, I will go to see the tree which let Lovely Lucy amnesic, and go to the ananas farm to enjoy sunset. I will go to the beacon where they have kiss there to wait my mermaid jill... This written English practice is the first step of my trip, it will become true one day.