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作者英语功底扎实，可适当调整文中从句数量；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；请作者增加高级词汇的使用，单词拼写更认真些。
When I was growing up,I really understand the life which is not comfortable for me but to continue living with my red heart and my belief. A person should have his own belief,it's meaningful for you to assure something,which is the same as fishes need water and birds fly in the sky.As a freshman,insisting the life belief is very nesscessiary. So to be a dreaming person,joining the student union is pretty good , if not,don't be upset,just try your best to learn and live.I prefer to get along well with each other,learn knowledge from something not only in the textbook,lead a normnal life in the school rather than be famous for everyone .It's very simple and I conform that I can do well. Time is not waiting for us,only can you rate with it or you can not get something.I always know that direct me going on the way more further and further.Welcoming a hopeful tomorrow, running and fighting for ourselves. Remember,no pain, no gain.Once you have own idea and plan it,do it,to have a strong decision and go.Don't put it aside and go ahead,the world will be better you can see..
