作者要注意增加使用高级词汇,单词拼写做的挺好;复杂句使用不错,句法规范;过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
There is an old saying-Once bitten, twice shy. It means a decade bite toward the snake is afraid of rope well. Someone hold the view that is just afraid of doing the matters which they have experienced in the first time that they did one. I do think so. For me, the deep experience is bitten by a dog in my childhood. It's bleeding, barking, fearing and exactly paining. Therefore scary for me and unforgettable. I was always hearing the affair that we can not run in front of a dog, it would make us suffer attacking from the dog. Thereafter I really didn't realize the dangerous until it happened to me. I became careful and walked slowly when I met a dog, no matter it looked cute if or not. But, horse hoof beneath, people have missteps. The same suffering came close to happen again when I exercised in the playground of my university at night, I was running and a dog chasing around me so tightly, which made me terrified, the memory emerge in my brain once again. Luckily, the owner of the dog stoping it to follow me when I shouting with crying. Really good risks. I'll try to hid away the dog when I meet it. .