作者词汇基本功很好,但在高级词汇的积累上还要努力;采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文中一些从句的使用为文章增色。
The picture captures a very special scene:a mother found his son was looking through some misleading information in the internet when she took a cup of coffe for her boy.apparently,just as the subtitle indicates ,it is unfortunate for us to live with so much misleading information,it is harm to everyone . why,you may wonder?there are several reasons to explain this harmness.to start with,misleading information may lead children to do something disadvantaged without awareness,just like bad education,furthermore,as we all know that health mental is vital for a child who grows up in his life.but the misleading information could destory the health circustamance so that children influenced by awful information .what is more,the misleading information can make people around family agrue or fight. In fact,the misleading information is a vividily phenomenon,it is high time that we should take concerted steps to clear that information and take more attention on our children's education .one person can do nothing,it is also need our garvement ,even our country,to take the first step right now.
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