2011年12月英语六级作文真题:成功之路

若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用，文章会更棒；文中词汇表达灵活多样，也能较好的使用部分高级词汇；建议增加衔接词和过渡词的使用。

I have studied in Yanbian University for half a year. Everyone tries to achieve academics success in his career. But I think only efforts will be successful. University is academic hall for the person that love of learning. University is the ocean of knowledge. Hardworking and preparation can lead to success. Good preparation, perseverance and diligence are the three essential of success. A man of solid preparation and perseverance always has an inflexible spirit. Careful planning helps reduce that possibility, and it is a basic skill that all business people have. Therefore, I believe that continued success in life will be the result of careful planning as well as taking risks. Only do these can academics success. I believe where there is a will there is a way. Academics success and efforts are inseparable.