过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;作者句法知识扎实,可适当增加从句的使用;作者词汇基础不错,高级词汇使用比较灵活。
With the development of the science and technology, an increasing number of people can be seen reading on the social networking websites, which brings about convenience but also givies rise to some troubles to . Such a trend, as for me, I hold the view that we can extend our social network through reading on social networking websites. At the same time, we will separate ourselves from the real social if we spend too much time on social networking websites. For instance, my brother Tony, a college student, who often reads on a social networking website named Facebook. He told me that he can reach out to many new friends through reading Facebook one hour a day. But he found that his recognition and acceptance was at risk when he spent five hours on reading Facebook everyday. Finally, I gave him some advises that he should spend less time on reading Facebook in order to dispose with his problem. To better address the problem, it is highly recommended that we spend time reasonably on social networking websites and be ware not to get over-indulged in reading Facebook.
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