过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;作者词汇量积累不错,能够较恰当地使用高级词汇;作者在句法层面做的很棒。
With the development of the science and technology, an increasing number of people can be seen reading on the social networking websites, which brings about convenience but also give rise to quite a few troubles . Such a trend, as for me, I hold the view that we can extend our social network through reading on social networking websites. At the same time, we will separate ourselves from the real social if we spend too much time on social networking websites. For instance, my brother Tony, a college student, who often reads on a social networking website named Facebook. He told me that he can reach out to many new friends through reading Facebook one hour a day. But he found that his recognition and acceptance were at risk when he spent five hours reading Facebook everyday. Finally, I gave him some advises that he should spend less time reading Facebook in order to dispose with his problem. To better address the problem, it is highly recommended that we spend time reasonably on social networking websites and beware not to get over-indulged in reading Facebook.
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