2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

有效地采用了多种衔接方法，层次清晰；作者要注意增加使用高级词汇，单词拼写做的挺好；复杂句使用不错，句法规范。

When it comes to online shopping，countless scenes run throuth my mind，because of online shopping have been become a fashion。 As to online shopping ，different people hold different kinds of opinion。Some prefer online shopping because it is very convenient for everyone to buy everthing goods when he stay at home。Besides，it can save much time to do other thing。However，others were disapprove online shopping because it can lead to a series of troubles。For example，we can't see the quantity of goods with our eyes when online shopping 。secondly，if we bought some clothes ，we can't try in person and then probably doesn't suit you。 As far as i am concerned，online shopping is do more good than harm。Actually，online shopping changed our life and make our life more convenient。Last but not least， we need to treat online shopping reasoningly。