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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40870
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采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用;文章词汇表达多样请继续保持,也能较准确地使用高级词汇,

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When facing some challenges, how to solve it and deal with it by our resources has always been one of the most important questions in our lifetime. If one puts all his eggs in one basket, it means this is the only way he must—have to choose; once it is a wrong way, it means he is going to fail without getting anything back. Undoubtedly, there are some opportunities to select in our life, some are common and the others are significant. Under this circumstance, we should not put all our belonging in one basket. Unfortunately, it is obvious that people in mounting numbers put their eggs in one basket. For example, a father led? his son to be instructed--trained to become a football star without learning other subjects. However, as we all know, being a football star is very difficult. Thus, once the boy is not able to play football perfectly in the future, the old man -- he will lost everything. Hence, an individual should put his eggs in diverse baskets. Meanwhile, he should realize which one is important and which one is the most -- more important. This is a sort of deed belonging to wise people.

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