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During our lifetime, we have to draw a great many conclusions by ourselves. How to come to conclusions has always been one of the most important issues in our life. Undoubtedly, due to a great deal of information we are able to acquire this period easily, to come to a proper conclusion is more and more difficult than ever before. Some people jump to conclusions upon seeing or hearing something. In my opinion, it is unwise and even ridiculous. Firstly, a lot of news on the Internet is not worthy of believing. Some people release some news in order to gain public attention. Secondly, facing to(删掉) a great number of remarks made by net citizens, we ought to cultivate the skill to recognize(distinguish between right and wrong). Finally, in our daily time(daily life) we need to focus on the news reported by authority such as CCTV and so on. In brief, it is imperative for us to improve the skill -- capability to draw a conclusion. Only in this way, we will – will we have enough understanding and restrain from jumping to conclusions just upon seeing or hearing something, when we encounter some issues.
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