单词拼写做得很好,请注意积累词汇量;加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;不能熟练使用过渡词,基本没有衔接词。
Li Li is my good friend. She's often reads books. She has a big eyes, yellow hair, big nose and small mouse. She likes dog. She doesn't like cat. In school, teachers very like her, many children like to her. She's has a black dig. She father and mother very like Li Li, and her dog.