单词拼写做得很好,请注意积累词汇量;加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。
Li Li is my good friend. She is often reads books. She has big eyes, yellow hair, big nose and small mouse. She likes dog. She doesn't like cat. In school, teachers very like her, many children love to her. She's has a black dig. She father and mother very like Li Li, and her dog.