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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9032
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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过程性词汇偏少;作者能较恰当使用丰富词汇,在高级词汇方面希望能更熟练一些文中从句使用过少。

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With the development of economic,our lifestyle have changed.in the past,we buy thing that we wanted.we maybe buy it by ourselves.nowadays,we can buy it by Group Purchasing. In social,Group Purchasing have become more and more popular.of course,Group Purchasing has many advantage,and many problem.firstly,it can save much money for us.then,what’s more,it can promiase quality for us.nonetheless,it has some disadvantage.such as,it could not help us to learn the product.the product could plan throw by the shoper.in my view,we should learn the thing before buying it,so that we can buy better product.at the same time,Group Purchasing is serious tricted by our. All in all,when and where,we should keep calm.we should think before buy something.not only because of it cheap.

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