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2009全国中考英语试题汇编试题(17)写作:英语学习

发布时间:2013-09-05 17:46浏览次数:276
要求:
新来的外教Jeremy看到大家对英语学习都充满着激情,为了鼓励大家更好的学习英语,他准备出一期英语学习经验交流专刊。请根据以下问题并结合你的实际情况,以“My English Learning”为题写一篇80词左右的英文稿件,要求至少涉及其中的三个问题。

提示:

When did you start learning English?

How do you learn English?
What is difficult to learn?

What other helpful ways do you know to learn English well?


My English Learning
用户的作文(系统评分61.5分
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文章词汇表达多样性不够,还要注意词汇拼写;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当,缺少组织,可适当增加连接词的使用;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

When I went to the middle school, I started to learn English. The is my frist time to think about learning a language except for mother language. I read the English book and watched the TV in English, and then I chat with my classmates in English .In my spare time, I listened some English musics and English TV shows. But it is too difficult to learn English. They are so many difficult and long words, they are so many phases and means. I could't remember so many words and expressions. However, we should hold on learning and using it everyday,and one day you will find it eary to understand.

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