2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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In China,there's a saying that "The landscape of Guilin tops that of any other place under heaven." In light of this,I will sdasrecommend Guilin as the first destination of my wqetrip to Csahina.sada asd as Overlooking the Li Jiang River,Guilin is located in the northeast of Guangxi. The name was derived from the cassia trees owqf the location. The trees line the streets of the town with yelloasdaw flowers blossoming every September,filling the air with sweet scent.eqqweqom ancient timesbeautiful mountains,clear rivers,grotesque rocks and mystic crags,which is a feast for the eyes. Sitting on a bamboo raft driftingsad down the river,visitors can see the varied shapes of the pinnacles reflected in the water. They will feel as if they were in a scroll of Chinese landscape painting.unparalleledweqw I believe that my foreign friend will marvel at the beauty of Guilin.