2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

从句数量偏少；行文流畅，但衔接词比较少；作者词汇量积累较好，但高级词汇的积累仍需加强，还要避免有拼写错误。

In China,there's a saying that "The landscape of Guilin tops that of any other place undesaasdsr heaven." In light of this,I will sdasrecommend Guilin as the first destination of my wqetrip to Csahina.sada asd as Overlooking the Li Jiang River,Guilin is located in the northeast of Guangxi. The name was derived from the cassia trees owqf the location. The trees line the streets of the town witsdaf sdsd f dsh yelloasdaw flowers blossoming every September,filling the air with sweet scentthe beauty of Guilin.