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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13018
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分67.5分
评语:

从句数量偏少;过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;作者用词灵活多样,但要注意文中极个别拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

As a famous saying goes:"No one is going to be an isolated island."We,human,born with the link with our mother,is meat to be connected to the other. We are social animal,partly because of the need of fighting against the (cankude) marlicious nature.To live better,we have to corparate with our partners,which lead us to a evolution byond other species. In today life, it seems more important for us to communicate with other people. The social life has become more intricate than any other time before. As a consequense, a person who has inferior communication skills is hard to do well in his daily life. So in conclusion,considering all that given reasons,please escape from your comfort zone and talk to your any other friends.

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