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The column chart above clearly indicates the chance in market shares of domestic and overseas smart-phone brands during the past ten years. From the figures given in the diagram, we can see that the percentage of overseas smart-phone has decreased dramatically from about 80% in 2005 to 43% in 2015. Meanwhile, the percentage of domestic brands was at a low level, only about 20% in 2005, while it reached to 55%, an increase of about 35 percentage points. There are a good many factors for the above-mentioned phenomenon and the main reasons are as follows. The most important factor to be considered is that with the science and technology of our motherland developing rapidly, the domestic smart-phone has become no longer expensive more than the overseas brands. In the second place, whit our country becoming strong, increasingly more and more people likes domestic brands more than overseas brands. According to the figures and the analysis above, we may predict that the booming domestic brands can, directly or indirectly, bring a positive influence on the development of economy. This trend towards a promising domestic brand is inevitable. Let's get to embrace this irreversible trend. There is no denying in saying that the whole society should create an envrionment that it conducive to the happy life of the aged people.