托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第48篇:是否是只有你赢得了比赛才说明参与运动是有价值的

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；作者在句法层面做的很棒；作者词汇基础不错，在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉。

When it comes to the question that is participating in sports worthwhile merely when we win something, my answer is absolutely no. I`ve always hold the belief that participating in sports is to build up my body, thus victory never being the first principle of participating in sports. In exception of win something, participating in sports brings us many other countless blessings.In the next passage, I`ll explain my view by combining with my personal feelings when I participate in sports. When I participate in sports, I feel relaxed. When I was in senior high school, I was in great pressure because of the university entrance examination. Thus, at each evening, I would jog around the soccer field. A ten-minute jogging saved me from pressure and frustration. When I participate in sports, I make friends with many people. I`m keen on playing table tennis.Many of my good friends love to play table tennis as well. Also, when I have disputes with my friends, we will choose to play table tennis to solve our disputes. In other words, the side who fail in playing table tennis will have a compromise to another side and then the disputes are eliminated by playing table tennis. Additionally, when there is no vis-a-vis competition in sports, I will enjoy more. Therefore, participating in sports is not just for wining something, but more for other maters,like releasing burdens, making friends or purely enjoying in it.