过渡词很丰富,衔接词同时使用的恰到好处;作者句法知识扎实,可适当增加从句的使用;用词灵活多样,但高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间。
Everything should be done which starts from doing small things. The man who wants to across the wall with many ladders, it's so wasteful to use lots of wooden ladders. At the first, the wooden ladders neither help him to arrive the top of wall nor save his energy. Maybe it is called loseing more than gaining. Considering problems should be following small steps to big steps. It's important for us to solve them more easily, like the man, do not take advantage of resources so that he fails in the end. In my view, one step at a time, just do my all small things to gain final progress, it's changeable from amount to quality. If the man knows how to take advantage of using his ladders, just put one standing up which makes him reached the top easily.