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With the development of information technology, it is convenient for us to find information on the Internet, but it is also more difficult for us to acquire useful information in spite of advanced information technology. In the past, the traditional ways of acquire information was reading books and asking our teachers and friends. But our science and technology is more and more advanced, result in that we can acquire information online. Although, the new way is more efficient and convenient, it also cause the difficulty in acquiring useful information. For instance, my brother Jack, a college student, who often finds academic information online to improve his study performance. Recently, he told me that he was troubled with those useless information on the network. To address the problem, it is highly recommended that we go through necessary analysis procedure after we acquire the information from the Internet and get useful one while discarding useless one.
