2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

如若适当增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；文章高级词汇使用熟练，词汇表达较为丰富；不能熟练使用过渡词，文章结构欠佳。

It is not wise to make a conclusion directly as we seeing something. This conclusion is usually wrong. Because everything has its different aspects while everyone has different views of the same thing. We often see a little aspect of one thing or getting some information from a few people. It is not objective. If we watched or heard something, we need to think about it and make a conclusion slowly.