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2009全国中考英语试题汇编试题(17)写作:英语学习

发布时间:2013-09-05 17:46浏览次数:276
要求:
新来的外教Jeremy看到大家对英语学习都充满着激情,为了鼓励大家更好的学习英语,他准备出一期英语学习经验交流专刊。请根据以下问题并结合你的实际情况,以“My English Learning”为题写一篇80词左右的英文稿件,要求至少涉及其中的三个问题。

提示:

When did you start learning English?

How do you learn English?
What is difficult to learn?

What other helpful ways do you know to learn English well?


My English Learning
用户的作文(系统评分70.0分
评语:

作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;作者句法知识很棒,适当增加从句的使用,会取得更不错的成绩;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用;请注意分段;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

用户练习作文:

My English Learning English is one of my best subjects and I started learning English when I was ten years old. But at the very beginning, listening seemed a little difficult for me. So I have been doing a lot of listening practice, such as listening to tapes, watching English TV programmes. And I found it really helped a lot. In fact, there are some more helpful ways to learn English well. For example, I enjoy singing English songs and I want to join an English Club or find a penfriend from English-speaking countries. I believe that nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.

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