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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第47篇:好室友是什么样的?

发布时间:2013-08-19 16:51浏览次数:2197
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作文题目:

Colleagues are the people who work with us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good colleague?

Use specific details and examples in your answer.

室友是跟我们一起生活的那个人。依你看,好室友是什么样的?给出例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分84.0分
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采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;句式变化多样,句法方面做的很棒;文章词汇表达多样请继续保持,也能较准确地使用高级词汇,

用户练习作文:

A Good Colleague Actually there`s no absolute definition for a good colleague since different persons have different characteristics or nature. When it comes to a good colleague, I deem a good colleague should be tolerant and try his or her best to integrate with others. From junior middle school to senior high school and then to university, I have been with many colleagues whose characteristics, hobbies and even ethnicity are different from mine.To live with those colleagues is not an easy thing. Tolerance and integration are indispensable. For example, one of my colleagues is minority ethnicity, and she does not eat pork. When we want to hold a party, we will choose a Muslim club in order not to violate her creed. She has many other custom from mine as well, but I can understand and say that`s good.There`s many conflicts being caused by difference, which can be avoided by following the principle of seeking common ground and reserve difference. To follow this principle well, we need to be tolerant. Similarly, No one in the world is totally perfect. Everyone has his or her shortcomings, for which we should be tolerant as well. Of course, some shortcomings can be overcome if we put forward them in a decent and friendly manner. In a word, everyone is unique in the world. Everyone has characteristics ,which is different from others. Everyone has his or her shortcomings. We may come from different places, having different hobbies and habits. Therefore,to live well together , we require being tolerant and try our best to integrate with others by following the principle of seeking common ground and reserve difference.Only by this way can we become good colleagues.

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