层次欠清晰;文中从句使用不丰富;文中词汇表达较为灵活,高级词汇需要加强,单词拼写要认真。
In our life , something bad or good happen to me everyday . we also meet different person on some accasion . so we have our own thoughts for the thing or person . but if we make a conclusion as soon as somthing happen ., it is not wise . I think ,we should anylize the inne r connection and find out why this happen . other we will will get the wrong point view which will led us to a wrong way .
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