雅思写作范文:出国旅游的利弊

拼写方面做得很棒，平时练习中注意词汇量的积累；文章中的过程性词汇比较丰富；句法知识掌握不错，但文中从句数量偏少。

In my opinion travel to other countries has positive effect to us. First of all, travel to other countries gives us the opportunity to contact with different cultures and learn from them. Second, It's also good for improving our language skill. Most of Chinese learn english for more than five years, but in daily life we have no change to use it.