采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;从句使用很不错,再接再厉;文中高级词汇使用熟练,在单词拼写方面要继续努力。
With the development of society,apply of technology in life is very widespread.Above picture facing a so easy problem,a boy says he needs tech support.The picture seems to be humorous and ridiculous but thought -provoking on second thought,which intends to inform us that technology has exerted important effect on education. Opinions vary about whether technology is indispensable in education.Some people insist that using tech support sevirously block development of eduation and rduce children's ability to think in independent.On the contrary,people calim that technology enhances learning effectiveness makes complex process to eassy for benefiting children.As for me,there is no doubt that it is necessary four us to use tech support for solving diffculty in education,but technology is just a tool and never can we depend on it in learning lives.
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