语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较好的使用部分高级词汇;从句使用很不错,再接再厉。
There is no doubt that it is not a smart way to making decision in one minute after seeing and hearing . The reason why I could deem that mainly for the following reasons.To begin with,We could not denying that it is think highly of the spot we saw,however,ever coin has two sides,we should take our mind on the real true inside.What's more,something faults maybe lie behind the true.Last but not least,what we see it take no guarantee that it will be fact. As far as I am concerned,no matter what we see we should keep a clear mind that we should concentrate on the true but not on what we see,so that we should not making decision so fast when facing problem.Only in this way,can we life more truly.
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