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Nowadays ,with the deveopment of internet technology ,shopping on line has become a fashion in most cities.and almost every people have the experirnce of it . Shopping on line has many advantages .Firstly , It's a very good choice for people who don't have much time , there are all kinds of goods ,whatever you want to buy ,you can buy it since just move your mouse.Secondly, it's also a good place for people who don't have much money .if one want to start a shop himself ,and don't have so much money ,he can apply for a shop online .It's much cheaper than it in reality.but there are also some advantages on it .beaause we can see the truth of the thing we bought .some merchants may cheat us .It's not as safe as shopping in markets.then shopping online needs more time to get the things . all in all ,we should think it over when shopping online to prevernt from being cheating .
