采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;从句使用很不错,再接再厉;作者用词灵活多样,但要注意文中极个别拼写错误。
With the development of society,apply of technology in life is very widespread.Above picture facing a so easy problem,a boy says he needs tech support.The picture seems to be humorous and ridiculous but thought -provoking on second thought,which intends to inform us that technology has exerted important effect on education. Opinions vary about whether technology is indispensable in education.Some people insist that using tech support seriously block development of education and reduce children's ability to think things out for theirselves.On the contrary,people claim that technology enhances learning effectiveness and simplifys complex issues .As for me,there is no doubt that it is necessary four us to use tech support for solving diffculty in education,but technology is just a tool and never can we depend on it in learning lives.
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