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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8969
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分55.5分
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采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更棒;文章在高级词汇的使用上还要下功夫,拼写检查也需加强。

用户练习作文:

Some pepople always judge a person by their appearance,which is not wise. There are some reasons account for this phenomenon.First of all,the appearance is herited from parents.Generally speaking,pepople have no chance to choose the apprearance,change it.Secondly,the appearance isn't represent the person.the appearance only is a aspect of a person.Except apperance,person has manythings ,such as characters,wisdoms.Last but not least,juding a person by apperance often lead to make mistakes.For instance,Someone who is capable to do manythings may be not handsome or beautiful,but you insist on that he has not the ability and don't give him any chance. All in all,judging by apperance is unwise.we can judge a person mainly by the abilities he has.

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