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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8969
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分72.0分
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错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒;作者词汇基础不错,注意极个别的拼写错误。

用户练习作文:

Some people always judge a person by their appearance,which is not wise. There are some reasons to account for this phenomenon.First of all,the appearance is inherited from parents.Generally speaking,people have no chance to choose the appearance,and change it.Secondly,the appearance cannot represent the person.The appearance only is an aspect of a person.Except apperance,person has manythings ,such as character,wisdom.Last but not least,juding a person by appearance often lead to make mistakes.As an example,someone who is capable of a job may not be handsome or beautiful,but you insist on that he has not the ability and he can't have an opportunity. All in all,judging by appearance is unwise.We can judge a person mainly by the abilities he has.

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