作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇,建议要多使用学术词汇;可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
How important is the name of a person? some people answer yes, others say no. What's my opinoin? According to my experience, I think name is very important for a person's life. A good name can help to make a good first impression. As we all know, people often use first impression to judge a person, and it's hard to change their first impressions. A special name can help you draw attention quickly, it means you will get more opportunities. While a normal name won't make you stand out from the crowd, you'll have little chance to be picked out, that means more less opportunities. Moreover, a catchy name can let you recognised quickly by your new friends or your new colleagues. So you can see, whether to make friends or work, a good name is very helpful to your life.