2015年高考作文优秀范文：登山活动

文中用词灵活多样，但要注意增加使用高级词汇；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；衔接成分偏少。

I like to see show, especially free show. I can do any thing to see a free and good show. Last Sunday, the news round that a comedy show would be presented in our local cinema by a famous company. My friends with me rushed to it. We had to queue for two houses to get in that there must have several hundred people present before the show began. We were very disappoint for the show. Many of artistes who should have appeared didn't come. It is a dullest show we have ever seen. The only funny thing we heard that evening came from the advertise at the beginning of program. He slipped his tongue.