小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错；建议加强过渡词和衔接词的积累，文章结构不严谨；作者词汇量提升空间很大，尤其要注意高级词汇积累，另外要注意个别拼写错误。

My new teacher named Laozhang.Maybe you will think how funy name.Yes,because he is my father.I think my father is my best teacher in my life.He is a happy man even though he is poor.He always optimistics facing life.This positive attitude infulenced me deeply.Hope one day I can use my efforts to make him have a good life.