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作者用词灵活多样，但要注意文中极个别拼写错误；错误句子很少，但从句使用不熟练；层次欠清晰，衔接成分很少。
A Beautiful City in China First of all, welcome to my hometown. Now let me show you some magnificent scenery in there. My hometown, full of majority ancient buidings which own a very long history. When you walking on the roads in the countryside or near the conttage, you will get a light and relax mood. Moreover, you will taste a mass of delicious food and have a precious chance to feel the traditional Chinese culture by yourself. Tai mountain has a great reputation in China, climbing can train our body and promote our resistance. If you want to have a try, it is my privilige to be a guidance for you. Looking forward to your reply.
