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作者词汇量积累不错，能够较恰当地使用高级词汇；句法很棒，若适当增加一些从句的使用，文章会取得更好的成绩；文章上下文衔接不是很紧凑，结构缺少组织。
A Beautiful City in China First of all, welcome my hometown. Now let me show you some magnificent scenery there. My hometown, full of majority ancient buildings which own a very long history. When you are walking on the roads in the countryside or near the cottage, you will get a light and relax mood. Moreover, you will taste a mass of delicious food and have a precious chance to feel the traditional Chinese culture by yourself. Tai mountain has a great reputation in China, climbing can train our body and promote our resistance. If you want to have a try, it is my privilege to be a guidance for you. I'm looking forward to your reply.
