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2009年9月英语六级作文真题:名字的重要性

发布时间:2013-05-18 00:37浏览次数:1771
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题目 On the Importance of a Name
要求
1.有人认为名字(名称)不重要;
2.有人认为非常重要;
3.你认为呢?
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分76.5分
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文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。

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How important is the name of a person? Some people say yes, others say no. What's my opinion? According to my experience, I think name is very important for a person's life. A good name can help to make a good first impression. As we all know, people often use the first impression to judge a person, and it's hard to change their first impressions. A special name can help you catch attentions quickly, it means you will get more opportunities. While a normal name won't make you stand out from the crowd, you'll have little chance to be picked out, that means fewer opportunities. Moreover, a catchy name can let you be recognised quickly by your new friends or your new colleagues. So you can see, whether to make friends or work, a good name is very helpful to your life.

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