文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
How important is the name of a person? Some people say yes, others say no. What's my opinion? According to my experience, I think name is very important for a person's life. A good name can help to make a good first impression. As we all know, people often use the first impression to judge a person, and it's hard to change their first impressions. A special name can help you catch attentions quickly, it means you will get more opportunities. While a normal name won't make you stand out from the crowd, you'll have little chance to be picked out, that means fewer opportunities. Moreover, a catchy name can let you be recognised quickly by your new friends or your new colleagues. So you can see, whether to make friends or work, a good name is very helpful to your life.