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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第46篇:是否每个人都有接受高等教育的权力

发布时间:2013-08-16 17:30浏览次数:3023
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

One argument states that higher education should be open to everyone, regardless of background. The opposing argument says that only the elite students should be allowed to proceed.

Discuss these ideas. Explain why.

是否每个人都有接受高等教育的权力。你的看法是?并给出解释。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分86.5分
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语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用;文中词汇使用灵活,高级词汇使用较丰富。

用户练习作文:

Higher education should be open to everyone, regardless of background Education is the equal right to everyone no matter who he or she is, which is the basic guarantee for democracy and human right. The argument that only the elite students should be allowed to proceed is preposterous. Without equal access to higher education, millions and billions of people will be harder to make a living in present rapidly changing times and will be totally weeded by the times, which would greatly hamper the progress of our society. Firstly, without equal access and right to higher education, millions and billions of people will lose the opportunity to gain the tech-edging knowledge, thus losing a chance to receive a decent job, which will also be devastating to the high-tech industries,which are in an increasing demands for talents with relevant expertise. While the elites merely accounts for a very small proportion of society and can not meet the increasingly high demands at all. Also, in a democratic society, deprivation some people of equal access and right to higher education is unfair, which would arouse many social issues caused the public complaints and hatreds. Then, the order of society will be chaotic, which is unfavorable for sustainable development and has great impacts on economy, social civilization and many other social fields, thus hampering the progress of our society. Last but not least, education is equal to everyone, regardless of races, ages, sexes , states and so forth, which is a kind of human right for everyone. As long as he or she want to receive education, no matter it`s lower education or higher education, he or she should be respect at least. Therefore, when it comes to the question should higher education be open to everyone, regardless of background, my answer is absolute "yes". Equal right for any education is everyone`s human rights, which is inviolable, which is the basis of democracy and sustainable progress of our society. It`s the call of the times.

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