2015年高考作文优秀范文：给父母的一封信

作者词汇基础不错，注意极个别的拼写错误；简单句偏多了；文章结构欠严谨，基本没有衔接成分。

Dear parents you're so busy for work everyday that ignore health of body. I'm very worry about yours health. father usually go to the company by drive a car. I tell you some advices. First, I suggest that you should go to the coperation on feet. I consist that go to company on feet much better than drive a car. Second, you sholud do excercise or play the ball or swim at gym once a week. On the other hand, living should has regulations.For example, not eat junk food and don't work too late. you should sleep early. your son fangxixi