2015年高考作文优秀范文：给父母的一封信

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Dear parents, you're so busy with work everyday that having ignored health of your body. I'm worried about your health very much. Father usually go to the company by drive a car. I tell you much advice. First, I suggest that you should go to the corperation on feet. I insist that going to company on feet is much better than driving a car. Second, you should do exercise or play the basketball and swim at gym once a week. On the other hand, living should has regulations. For example, don't eat junk food and don't work too late. You should sleep early. your son Fangxixi