2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

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My views on online shopping Shopping online is becoming more and more popular in our life.That have some reasons as follows. It is very convenient to buy our needing things for us.And most things are quite cheap and fashion .It pays attention to us. But erery coins has two sides.It is unsafe through this way to trade.And many customers has been cheated. As far as I am considerd,you can trade to buy some things but you shoud keep safe as soon as possible.