2015年高考作文优秀范文：给父母的一封信

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文中词汇表达灵活多样，也能较好的使用部分高级词汇；结构不严谨，行文不流畅。

Dear parents, You're so busy with work everyday that having ignored health of your body. I'm worried about your health very much. Father usually goes to the company by driving a car. I tell you much advice. First, I suggest that you should go to the corporation on feet. I insist that going to company on feet is much better than driving a car. Second, you should do exercise or play basketball and swim at gym once a week. On the other hand, living should have regulations. For example, don't eat junk food and don't work too late. You should sleep early. Your son Fangxixi.